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− | Expressions that are informal or even [[colloquialisms | colloquial]] may be too informal for formal academic or business writing or speaking contexts. These are not necessarily wrong, but are dispreferred or considered less appropriate for such types of writing or discourse, and more formal expressions are preferred. Informal expressions, compared to their more formal counterparts, may be distinguished by the following characteristics. | + | Expressions that are informal or even [[colloquialisms | colloquial]] may be too informal for formal academic or business writing or speaking contexts. These are not necessarily wrong, but are dispreferred or considered less appropriate for such types of writing or discourse, and more formal expressions are preferred. |
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+ | ==General characteristics== | ||
+ | Informal expressions, compared to their more formal counterparts, may be distinguished by the following characteristics. | ||
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| Shorter, more common words (often from the Old Germanic or Old French parts of the English lexicon) || Longer, multi-syllabic terms from Latin, Greek, modern French, or other languages || ''sick'' vs. ''infection'' | | Shorter, more common words (often from the Old Germanic or Old French parts of the English lexicon) || Longer, multi-syllabic terms from Latin, Greek, modern French, or other languages || ''sick'' vs. ''infection'' | ||
|- | |- | ||
− | | Common words, e.g., high school level vocabulary || Less common, specialized vocabulary of certain fields; college or post-graduate level vocabulary || ''machine'' vs. ''laparoscope, EKG, eye tracker'' | + | | Common, high-frequency words, e.g., high school level vocabulary || Less common, low-frequency vocabulary; specialized vocabulary of certain fields; college or post-graduate level vocabulary || ''machine'' vs. ''laparoscope, EKG, eye tracker'' |
|- | |- | ||
− | | Words that have an emotional, biased, or negative tone || Neutral sounding vocabulary || ''grammar Nazi'' vs. ''prescriptivist'' | + | | Words that have an emotional, biased, or negative tone || Neutral sounding vocabulary || ''grammar Nazi'' vs. ''pedantic, prescriptivist'' |
|- | |- | ||
| Words or phrases that are more metaphorical || More transparent, neutral and precise terminology || ''don't beat around the bush'' vs. ''equivocate, prevaricate'' | | Words or phrases that are more metaphorical || More transparent, neutral and precise terminology || ''don't beat around the bush'' vs. ''equivocate, prevaricate'' | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | Contractions || Full forms || ''can't'' vs. ''cannot'' | ||
|} | |} | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | Some common examples of informal expressions include the following. | ||
+ | |||
+ | ;Colloquial and slang vocabulary: | ||
+ | * That's cool. Just chock it up to experience. | ||
+ | * They're in cahoots with the mafia. | ||
+ | |||
+ | ;Regional or dialect expressions: | ||
+ | * Tell me it ain't so. | ||
+ | * We gotta schlep this couch up the stairs. ("schlep" = New York slang) | ||
+ | * Oy! There's some bloke making off with a TV! | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Expletives or taboo expressions: | ||
+ | * Bloody hell, it's bloody cold out there. | ||
+ | * I don't give a damn anymore. Let's just go to the pub and get pissed. | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Sexist, racist, or discriminatory language: | ||
+ | It should be pretty obvious that language that even implies negative attitudes toward women, minorities, ethnic groups, members of the LGBT community, etc. are inappropriate. | ||
+ | |||
+ | ;Gender-biased language: | ||
+ | This includes terms that use masculine words for people who could have female members. | ||
+ | * Postman → letter carrier, postal worker | ||
+ | * Businessman → business people | ||
+ | * Policeman → police officer | ||
+ | |||
+ | Likewise for possessive adjectives: | ||
+ | * Each student must bring <s>his</s> identification. → his/her identification; OR: All students must bring their identification. | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ==Sentence types== | ||
+ | Some informal types of sentences can be made more formal. | ||
+ | |||
+ | ;Using question and answer format in an essay: | ||
+ | * This leads to the following questions. Do aliens fly around the Earth? Are they really spying on us? Are they really kidnapping people? The evidence says "no." | ||
+ | * Can they still be considered to have social value? Yes, they can certainly still be appreciated by society. | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Using quotation style and quoted expressions to present and develop points. | ||
+ | * Some people on the Internet keep asking questions like "Are aliens spying on us?" or "Are they really kidnapping people?" The evidence says "no." | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Overuse of quotations: | ||
+ | Sometimes quotations are used when they are not really necessary, especially common quotations. To avoid sounding too informal, they can be deleted if they are not really necessary; otherwise, they can be paraphrased without direct quotations. | ||
+ | * Can they still be considered to have social value? Well, as Shakespeare said, "A rose by any other name is still a rose," so yes, they can still be appreciated by society. | ||
+ | ;Idioms, clichés (common, overused expressions) and aphorisms (common phrases that convey popular sentiments). | ||
+ | * He's older than dirt. | ||
+ | * I wasn’t born yesterday. | ||
+ | * There’s more than one way to skin a cat. | ||
+ | * He's driving her up the wall. | ||
− | ==Nouns== | + | |
+ | ==Nouns and pronouns== | ||
In many contexts, these terms might be vague or too non-specific, and would be better if replaced by a more specific noun, which will depend on the context. | In many contexts, these terms might be vague or too non-specific, and would be better if replaced by a more specific noun, which will depend on the context. | ||
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! colloquial !! more formal | ! colloquial !! more formal | ||
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− | | person, people (often vague) | + | | person, people (often vague) || individual, Canadians, researchers, subjects, voters, males, participants ... |
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− | |||
|- | |- | ||
| man || males, (male) participants / subjects, male voters, etc. | | man || males, (male) participants / subjects, male voters, etc. | ||
− | |||
− | |||
|- | |- | ||
| part || portion, section, sector, segment, aspect | | part || portion, section, sector, segment, aspect | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | thing || object, device, item, situation, circumstance, subject, element ... | ||
|- | |- | ||
| way (e.g., a way to do something) || manner, method, means, methodology, instrument, aspect | | way (e.g., a way to do something) || manner, method, means, methodology, instrument, aspect | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | women || females, (female) participants, etc. | ||
|} | |} | ||
− | + | Likewise, the following indefinite pronouns can be replaced with more specific nouns. | |
− | + | * someone, anyone → an individual, a Canadian, a researcher, a particular subject, one particular voter, certain participants | |
+ | * something, anything → an object, a device, an item, a subject, an element | ||
+ | * somewhere, anywhere → a certain location, some unknown village, the city of Brighton | ||
+ | * everywhere → all locations, all counties of Alberta | ||
+ | * everyone → all the citizens of Liverpool, a majority of residents in Cleveland | ||
+ | * everything → all atoms in the universe | ||
==Verbs== | ==Verbs== | ||
− | Second person verb forms, including commands | + | |
+ | ;Second person: | ||
+ | The second person ''you'' in writing sounds very informal or personal, and it is generally avoided in all forms of academic writing. Likewise, second-person verb forms are avoided, including commands like ''Do not do this.'' | ||
+ | |||
+ | ;First person: | ||
+ | The first person ''I'' and ''we'' can sound informal, especially the singular ''I'' and ''me''. These are generally avoided in formal writing, except when the authors need to comment directly, e.g., when explaining their rationale for doing something. First person is rarely used in science writing, occasionally in social science writing, and somewhat more often in humanities writing, such as in literature studies. If first person is really needed, ''we'' is better than ''I''. | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Standard contractions: | ||
+ | It is preferable to write out full forms instead of contractions | ||
+ | * don't → do not | ||
+ | * can't → can not, cannot | ||
+ | * we've → we have | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ;Colloquial contractions: | ||
+ | It is better to avoid [[colloquial contractions]] such as these. | ||
+ | * ain't | ||
+ | * doncha | ||
+ | * innit? (UK English) | ||
+ | |||
+ | |||
+ | ===Common verbs=== | ||
+ | Many common verbs that are frequently used in English may have fairly general meanings, or may sound informal. This can include more idiomatic verbal expressions They can be substituted as follows. | ||
+ | |||
+ | {| class="wikitable" | ||
+ | ! Common verb !! More specific | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | free || release | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | give the go ahead || authorize, permit | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | let || allow, permit, grant | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | need to || require, is required | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | show || demonstrate, illustrate, portray, indicate, exhibit | ||
+ | |} | ||
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{| class="wikitable" | {| class="wikitable" | ||
− | ! | + | ! Light verb !! More specific |
|- | |- | ||
| be || exist, occur, equal, consist of, comprise (of), typify, appear, seem, tend... | | be || exist, occur, equal, consist of, comprise (of), typify, appear, seem, tend... | ||
|- | |- | ||
− | | | + | | do || perform, execute, carry out, implement, manage... |
+ | |- | ||
+ | | get || obtain, acquire, come into possession (of), capture | ||
|- | |- | ||
| give || provide, yield, produce, lead to, impart... | | give || provide, yield, produce, lead to, impart... | ||
|- | |- | ||
− | | | + | | go, run, come || proceed, journey, travel, progress, exceed... |
+ | |- | ||
+ | | have || possess, contain, exhibit ... <br> In descriptive phrases, '''have''' can be replaced with '''with''', e.g. "A patient who had the flu" → "A patient with the flu" | ||
|- | |- | ||
| make || create, produce, facilitate... | | make || create, produce, facilitate... | ||
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|- | |- | ||
| set, put || place, position, arrange... | | set, put || place, position, arrange... | ||
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− | ===Phrasal verbs=== | + | ===Phrasal verbs and prepositional verbs=== |
− | When possible, phrasal verbs should be replaced with more formal verbs (of Latin origin). For example, many ESL students use '''find out''' when a better expression for formal writing would be '''discover, determine, ascertain'''. Since phrasal verbs often have many meanings, the choice will depend on the context. | + | When possible, phrasal verbs should be replaced with more formal verbs (often, verbs of Latin origin) with more specific meanings. For example, many ESL students use '''find out''' when a better expression for formal writing would be '''discover, determine, ascertain'''. Since phrasal verbs often have many meanings, the choice will depend on the context. The same applies to some VERB + PREPOSITION combinations formed with a fairly common verb. |
− | {| class="wikitable" | + | {| class="wikitable sortable" |
− | ! | + | ! Phrasal / prep. verb !! More specific |
+ | |- | ||
+ | | be about, it's about || it concerns; in regard to; this deals with, handles, addresses, explicates | ||
|- | |- | ||
| blow up || inflate, explode | | blow up || inflate, explode | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | deal with || handle, manage, address | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | fill in || substitute, inform, complete | ||
|- | |- | ||
| find out || find, discover, ascertain, determine, decide on, assess | | find out || find, discover, ascertain, determine, decide on, assess | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | get in touch with || contact, establish contact with | ||
|- | |- | ||
| get over || recover | | get over || recover | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | go against || contradict, oppose | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | go around || circumvent, circumnavigate, sidestep, ignore, rotate, gyrate, orbit, circumduct, twist, revolve, meander, ramble | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | go down || decrease, diminish, abate | ||
|- | |- | ||
| go out || exit, diminish, leave, depart, extinguish, cease, die, dim, expire, subside, decline, dwindle, recede, quit, retire, withdraw | | go out || exit, diminish, leave, depart, extinguish, cease, die, dim, expire, subside, decline, dwindle, recede, quit, retire, withdraw | ||
|- | |- | ||
− | | go | + | | go up || increase, arise |
+ | |- | ||
+ | | leave out || omit, delete | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | look at || examine, observe | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | make up || fabricate, create; comprise, consist (of) | ||
|- | |- | ||
| mix up || mix, confuse | | mix up || mix, confuse | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | point out || indicate, index, refer to | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | put off || postpone, delay, procrastinate | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | put up (with) || tolerate, endure | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | rack up || accumulate | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | ring up || call, telephone | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | set up || establish | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | show up || arrive, appear | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | stand for || represent; tolerate | ||
|- | |- | ||
| take out || excise, remove, clear, exclude, omit, extirpate, destroy | | take out || excise, remove, clear, exclude, omit, extirpate, destroy | ||
+ | |- | ||
+ | | think about || consider, deliberate | ||
|} | |} | ||
Revision as of 09:11, 22 November 2019
Expressions that are informal or even colloquial may be too informal for formal academic or business writing or speaking contexts. These are not necessarily wrong, but are dispreferred or considered less appropriate for such types of writing or discourse, and more formal expressions are preferred.
Contents
1 General characteristics
Informal expressions, compared to their more formal counterparts, may be distinguished by the following characteristics.
Informal expressions | Formal expressions | Informal cf. formal examples |
---|---|---|
Words that are more general or less precise in meaning | Terms with more specific, precise meaning or scope | people vs. Canadians, voters, participants, etc. |
Shorter, more common words (often from the Old Germanic or Old French parts of the English lexicon) | Longer, multi-syllabic terms from Latin, Greek, modern French, or other languages | sick vs. infection |
Common, high-frequency words, e.g., high school level vocabulary | Less common, low-frequency vocabulary; specialized vocabulary of certain fields; college or post-graduate level vocabulary | machine vs. laparoscope, EKG, eye tracker |
Words that have an emotional, biased, or negative tone | Neutral sounding vocabulary | grammar Nazi vs. pedantic, prescriptivist |
Words or phrases that are more metaphorical | More transparent, neutral and precise terminology | don't beat around the bush vs. equivocate, prevaricate |
Contractions | Full forms | can't vs. cannot |
Some common examples of informal expressions include the following.
- Colloquial and slang vocabulary
- That's cool. Just chock it up to experience.
- They're in cahoots with the mafia.
- Regional or dialect expressions
- Tell me it ain't so.
- We gotta schlep this couch up the stairs. ("schlep" = New York slang)
- Oy! There's some bloke making off with a TV!
- Expletives or taboo expressions
- Bloody hell, it's bloody cold out there.
- I don't give a damn anymore. Let's just go to the pub and get pissed.
- Sexist, racist, or discriminatory language
It should be pretty obvious that language that even implies negative attitudes toward women, minorities, ethnic groups, members of the LGBT community, etc. are inappropriate.
- Gender-biased language
This includes terms that use masculine words for people who could have female members.
- Postman → letter carrier, postal worker
- Businessman → business people
- Policeman → police officer
Likewise for possessive adjectives:
- Each student must bring
hisidentification. → his/her identification; OR: All students must bring their identification.
2 Sentence types
Some informal types of sentences can be made more formal.
- Using question and answer format in an essay
- This leads to the following questions. Do aliens fly around the Earth? Are they really spying on us? Are they really kidnapping people? The evidence says "no."
- Can they still be considered to have social value? Yes, they can certainly still be appreciated by society.
- Using quotation style and quoted expressions to present and develop points.
- Some people on the Internet keep asking questions like "Are aliens spying on us?" or "Are they really kidnapping people?" The evidence says "no."
- Overuse of quotations
Sometimes quotations are used when they are not really necessary, especially common quotations. To avoid sounding too informal, they can be deleted if they are not really necessary; otherwise, they can be paraphrased without direct quotations.
- Can they still be considered to have social value? Well, as Shakespeare said, "A rose by any other name is still a rose," so yes, they can still be appreciated by society.
- Idioms, clichés (common, overused expressions) and aphorisms (common phrases that convey popular sentiments).
- He's older than dirt.
- I wasn’t born yesterday.
- There’s more than one way to skin a cat.
- He's driving her up the wall.
3 Nouns and pronouns
In many contexts, these terms might be vague or too non-specific, and would be better if replaced by a more specific noun, which will depend on the context.
colloquial | more formal |
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person, people (often vague) | individual, Canadians, researchers, subjects, voters, males, participants ... |
man | males, (male) participants / subjects, male voters, etc. |
part | portion, section, sector, segment, aspect |
thing | object, device, item, situation, circumstance, subject, element ... |
way (e.g., a way to do something) | manner, method, means, methodology, instrument, aspect |
women | females, (female) participants, etc. |
Likewise, the following indefinite pronouns can be replaced with more specific nouns.
- someone, anyone → an individual, a Canadian, a researcher, a particular subject, one particular voter, certain participants
- something, anything → an object, a device, an item, a subject, an element
- somewhere, anywhere → a certain location, some unknown village, the city of Brighton
- everywhere → all locations, all counties of Alberta
- everyone → all the citizens of Liverpool, a majority of residents in Cleveland
- everything → all atoms in the universe
4 Verbs
- Second person
The second person you in writing sounds very informal or personal, and it is generally avoided in all forms of academic writing. Likewise, second-person verb forms are avoided, including commands like Do not do this.
- First person
The first person I and we can sound informal, especially the singular I and me. These are generally avoided in formal writing, except when the authors need to comment directly, e.g., when explaining their rationale for doing something. First person is rarely used in science writing, occasionally in social science writing, and somewhat more often in humanities writing, such as in literature studies. If first person is really needed, we is better than I.
- Standard contractions
It is preferable to write out full forms instead of contractions
- don't → do not
- can't → can not, cannot
- we've → we have
- Colloquial contractions
It is better to avoid colloquial contractions such as these.
- ain't
- doncha
- innit? (UK English)
4.1 Common verbs
Many common verbs that are frequently used in English may have fairly general meanings, or may sound informal. This can include more idiomatic verbal expressions They can be substituted as follows.
Common verb | More specific |
---|---|
free | release |
give the go ahead | authorize, permit |
let | allow, permit, grant |
need to | require, is required |
show | demonstrate, illustrate, portray, indicate, exhibit |
4.2 Light verbs
These are common, everyday verbs that are rather non-specific in meaning. These are distinguished from other verbs, in that (1) they are the first verbs learned in the language; (2) they have a great variety of meanings, and thus can be less specific semantically; and (3) they are often used in idioms, set expressions, and collocational expressions. In academic writing, many times it is better if these can be replaced with more specific verbs, and the choice will depend on the context. However, in set expressions like 'get married' it may be difficult to replace them.
Light verb | More specific |
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be | exist, occur, equal, consist of, comprise (of), typify, appear, seem, tend... |
do | perform, execute, carry out, implement, manage... |
get | obtain, acquire, come into possession (of), capture |
give | provide, yield, produce, lead to, impart... |
go, run, come | proceed, journey, travel, progress, exceed... |
have | possess, contain, exhibit ... In descriptive phrases, have can be replaced with with, e.g. "A patient who had the flu" → "A patient with the flu" |
make | create, produce, facilitate... |
set, put | place, position, arrange... |
4.3 Phrasal verbs and prepositional verbs
When possible, phrasal verbs should be replaced with more formal verbs (often, verbs of Latin origin) with more specific meanings. For example, many ESL students use find out when a better expression for formal writing would be discover, determine, ascertain. Since phrasal verbs often have many meanings, the choice will depend on the context. The same applies to some VERB + PREPOSITION combinations formed with a fairly common verb.
Phrasal / prep. verb | More specific |
---|---|
be about, it's about | it concerns; in regard to; this deals with, handles, addresses, explicates |
blow up | inflate, explode |
deal with | handle, manage, address |
fill in | substitute, inform, complete |
find out | find, discover, ascertain, determine, decide on, assess |
get in touch with | contact, establish contact with |
get over | recover |
go against | contradict, oppose |
go around | circumvent, circumnavigate, sidestep, ignore, rotate, gyrate, orbit, circumduct, twist, revolve, meander, ramble |
go down | decrease, diminish, abate |
go out | exit, diminish, leave, depart, extinguish, cease, die, dim, expire, subside, decline, dwindle, recede, quit, retire, withdraw |
go up | increase, arise |
leave out | omit, delete |
look at | examine, observe |
make up | fabricate, create; comprise, consist (of) |
mix up | mix, confuse |
point out | indicate, index, refer to |
put off | postpone, delay, procrastinate |
put up (with) | tolerate, endure |
rack up | accumulate |
ring up | call, telephone |
set up | establish |
show up | arrive, appear |
stand for | represent; tolerate |
take out | excise, remove, clear, exclude, omit, extirpate, destroy |
think about | consider, deliberate |
5 Adjectives, adverbials, & other modifiers
In many contexts, these terms might be vague or too non-specific, and would be better if replaced by a more specific word, which will depend on the context.
colloquial | more formal |
---|---|
bad | negative, pejorative, poor, ineffective, adverse... |
big, huge | large, significant, enormous, incredible, gargantuan, gigantic, massive |
a bit, a little bit | slightly, somewhat |
good | sufficient, excellent, optimal, ideal, studious, prime, positive, effective, beneficial |
kind of, sort of | somewhat, slightly |
a lot of, lots of | many, numerous, a large number / amount of |
tiny | small, very small, minute |
6 Transitional / connector expressions
colloquial | more formal |
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anyway | This is used informally for changing topics; in formal writing, simply starting a sentence with a full noun topic, or starting a new paragraph, will often suffice. |
besides | More formal alternatives are ‘in addition to’ or ‘furthermore’ - e.g., “In addition to these factors, ...”. |
first of all | first |
like | (is) similar to; for example, as, such as (As a connector, like can seem slightly colloquial. However, as a conjunction before verb phrases, or as a preposition, like is generally fine in contemporary formal English) |
nowadays | currently, recently |
whether or not | whether |
Here are some examples of the more informal like, and more formal counterparts. Here, the informal like is used as a conjunction.
- Don't do like what she did. → Do not do as she has done.
- Activities like smoking and drinking are not allowed here. → Activities such as smoking and drinking are not allowed here.
Some examples of like that are perfectly fine, particularly when it is used as a preposition.
- We don't want any characters like him around.
- She looks just like me.
7 See also
- Easily confused verbs such as say, tell, talk